Critiques (1)
This is starting to get intense. The whole story is speeding up and it's downright action-packed. A child is also entering the plot, and we don't know what to think of them. What will their next role be? I don't know, but the main question remains unanswered! Will that guy make it to the top of the hill or not? No, unfortunately, this is something I really can't influence.
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